Saturday, October 10, 2009

Weekdays on rails...

A new day dawns, and he awakes from his bed,
Only to go asleep once again- u'd think he was dead.
Disheveled hair, untucked shirt, he runs to catch the train,
Trying to make up for lost time spent dreaming of winter rain.

He is late, as expected, and is last in line..
At the queue, under the callous sun - shining a bit too fine.
He pays his 6 rupees, and places the holy grail in his pocket,
And holds on to it for dear life, now he knows how the Templars felt.
For he is on a train, from Pallavaram to Guindy...
with the world and its people - some queer some dandy.

Following the clickety-clack of steel wheels, assisted by a zillion a banter,
He reaches his end of the cubicle, one share auto and 9 floors later.
He logs in, He starts his day, and all seems fine and gay,
With breaks in the morning, breaks at noon, breaks in the evening - well, a million breaks a day...
Till its time to end the play, for it is time to break away- It was a useless day anyway..

He take a bus back, crowded to the brim,
And he realizes that the population needs a trim.
Ten depressing kilometers and 30 rupees after,
He enters the hallowed portals of his house - his greatest disaster.

For while the rooms are neat and tidy, not at all unruly,
There is an unfathomable void, in the life of yours truly.
And he is alone, writing a poem in his computer- his one true love (and his bike of course),
When he should be doing great things, if only he had the resolve,the courage and the force..

htnakirs

9 comments:

  1. jeeks.. life's a looping statement.. unless we give break statements !!! :P

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  2. I can perfectly empathize :) But let me quote someone here: The human brain is so complex, that no matter how irrelevant or useless a particular activity may seem to our goals and dreams, it would give us some learning that would be related to the goal/dream in some superficial way at least. I don't know how true it is but I want to buy it!
    Neat poem, great start!

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  3. Very nice dude..!

    I liked the beginning a lot... nice contrast with overtones of medivial europe and morning chennai rush.

    And ya.. may the force be with you..!

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  4. Hi htnakirS alias jeeeeks....sooperrrrrrrb poem...No words to say ..no words to type !!.. morning blues and lousy evenings..when looked back the day is just another day anyway.. !!

    Never knew u'd write such beautiful poems...Send me ur collections naa...

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  5. @supreethi : wat collections sup.. felt bored one day so wrote... :D

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  6. Nice one :)! And is it really that bad?

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  7. @sriram : no da nothing like that..quite the opposite actually.. ive been taking my bike to work the past month.. but first few days were like this only...

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  8. dude .. dont wrry .. one year will fly real fast .. and believe me .. the work ex will help u when u come here next yr .. and verizon is a very popular name here ;-) so enjoy and learn as much as u can while there .. ;-)

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